Lotuspaw, Medicine Cat Apprentice of StreamClan

Name: Lotuskit, Lotuspaw, Lotusblossom
Age: She is currently aged 12 moons, almost about the age to begin regular warrior training.
Gender: She-Cat
Rank: Medicine Cat Apprentice (APPROVED BY DEW)
Clan/Tribe: StreamClan
Full Description: A lean, scarred, three-legged tortoiseshell with glimmering yellow eyes that seem to glow brightly in the darkness of the night.
Personality: She doesn't really like to do anything and likes to be left alone at times, and if you try to bug her or even talk to her, well, be warned! She likes to sit around a lot and be lazy, but she will do anything to save her Clan from destruction. At rare times she can be found very kind and thoughtful and helpful to her Clanmates. She appreciates loners, rogues, AND kittypets because of her past, and tries to help sick or injured ranked cats like this, even though it is against the Warrior Code.
Family/History: Lotuspaw was born and raised in FallowClan with Spectaclepaw, Spottedpaw, and Snowfoot. Spectaclepaw was her youngest brother, but he died in a battle against FireClan. Spottedpaw was her same-aged sister, who also manages the little hotel in the sky now. Snowfoot is her older sister, who is still alive to this day but hates her. Lotuspaw's mother hated her; her mother never wanted to have kits so instead Lotuskit had to manage on her own. Then, disaster struck right before Lotuskit's apprentice ceremony. Cliffpelt, Lotuskit's father, betrayed the Clan. Cliffpelt was cast out, banished, and never to return. This was horrible to Lotuskit, since she looked up to Cliffpelt and admired him. Cliffpelt was the only family she knew that didn't hate her ever since the death of her two other siblings. It took Lotuspaw a few moons to realize that family didn't have to come from blood, it could come from heart. Lotuspaw escaped FallowClan to find her father, and found out he joined StreamClan. On her way there, a long, large Thunderpath separated them. She had never seen these before in FallowClan territory, and crossed them slowly without knowing what could happen. A monster blasted past, trampling her. She lost one back leg because of this, and was partially blind for a while until a fellow loner friend helped her out. She thanked the loner, but never saw him again. Lotuspaw joined there in StreamClan with her father, but the Clan was in danger and needed a medicine cat. Lotuspaw jumped in and helped the other medicine cats. She trained extra hard as a medicine cat apprentice, and never gave up on her dreams.
Strengths & Weaknesses: Lotuspaw is great at memorizing things, and great with keeping a long stamina. She's also great at running, hunting, and healing cats. She always aces her medicine, herbs, and ailments tests. She's horrible at swimming and in battle. She doesn't like to see cats get hurt, but got over it after a long few moons of being the StreamClan medicine cat. She has very dull claws, which makes it hard for her to climb and hang on. This also prevents her from running, but she doesn't stop, since it is her dream. She never lets her three legs stop her from doing anything. :)
Roleplay Sample: Lotuspaw padded along the gray, cracked surface. Her paws ached. "When will this path ever end? I've never seen this before in FallowClan territory!" she wailed, stopping to lick her paws clean every now and then. A sharp red light shown from beyond, but it was coming closer very quickly. "What's that?" her heart thudded in her throat. Then, there it was. A large, scarlet-red monster coming straight at her! There was no time to panic. She ran to the other side, but she was too late. The monster bashed into her side and clamped it's "jaws" on her leg. A loud crack echoed through the clearing, and she wailed with fright once again. A cry rose in her stomach, and it burst out, echoing along with the crack. The monster limped away, suddenly driving slower as if it had gotten hurt as well. Lotuspaw looked around. She couldn't see anything through her right eye. She breathed heavily, not knowing what to do. Then, a pitch black tom-cat padded and entered the clearing calmly. He widened her eyes at the sight, and rushed over to help the injured little kitten. Lotuspaw closed her eyes, feeling very tired and light-headed. After what seemed like moons and moons, the loner dipped his head as a sign to say he was done. Lotuspaw limped up with the loners help, gazing into his eyes. "Thank you," she rasped. "I don't know what I would've done without you."
The loner nodded his head and met Lotuspaw's gaze. "Don't worry. I'll always be around." Then, his swift and elegant body and turned away into the moonlight, swaying his tail in the soft, whistling wind. She lost his gaze and didn't know what to do. She looked around, seeing nothing but the stars of the night hanging heavily above her. A tear dropped down her cheek and onto her shoulder. She moved along, limping and crying. She looked for her father and opened her jaws every once in a while to find his scent. After that, she never saw the handsome loner again.
Other: "You don't know what it feels like to be in love, Snowfoot, so shut up." "No problem. After you give me proof." Lotuspaw stared at her, lowering her eyebrows and not knowing what to say. Snowfoot laughed. "Ha! Of course. Just another naive, lying little kitten."

I finished the whole thing. Is it good now? :)

Nice! Accepted.
:accepted:

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