Willowflight of Hickoryclan

Name: Willowkit Willowpaw Willowflight
Age: 45 moons
Gender: female
Preferred position: Warrior
Clan/tribe: Hickoryclan
Alive Family: NaN
Deceased Family:
Mother - Silverflank, died by getting hit by a monster when she was hunting
Father - Firenose, died of bloodcough
Littermates - Coldkit, died at birth, Shiningkit, died at birth
Description: Willowflight is a tortoiseshell KITTY KAT. She has a black tail and is blind in one eye. Her blind eye is a deep blue, and her good eye is a stunning green. Willowflight has long fur around her ears.

Physical Abilities: Willowflight is a bad hunter, but is a great fighter, with a stocky build. She has very sharp teeth and claws. She is very fast. Willowflight is a bad tracker, and she has trouble hunting and finding other cats.
Personality: Willowflight is a battle-loving KITTY KAT who will jump into fights at the very chance. If there is no reason, though, then Willowflight will not fight, because she believes that everything should be fair. She is bossy most of the time, and she never teases or plays around. She is very serious. She is loyal to Bloodshine, but disagrees with her savage actions.
Likes and Dislikes: Willowflight loves fighting, but hates to hunt. Hunting makes her feel sick, like she is eating yarrow. Fighting, though, makes her feel powerful and respected. She fringes at the sight of lakes, but is fine with rivers.
History: Willowflight as a kit was never playful, but cruel and nasty to the other kits. She was an only kit, because her siblings, Coldkit and Shiningkit, died at birth. She was strong and fast, but never used her skill in games. Willowflight only used it to torment the other kits behind her parent's back. She hated her parents, very much. She thought that they were trying to make her feel unhappy. When her father died from Bloodcough, she was happy, and loved seeing her mother Silverflank grieve. She was finally apprenticed, and was a rotten show-off. She would taunt the other apprentices, saying that they were too slow and clumsy. Willowflight went into battle for first time, and she loved it more than anything. She longed to stay and fight, but was sent back by her mentor because it was getting big. After the battle, she became a warrior. Her vigil was silent, except for a kit who tried to sneak out of camp. Willowflight killed the kit, and blamed it on the kit eating a deathberry. Soon after, Silverflank died from a monster. Willowflight rejoiced silently and pretended to be distressed.
Roleplay Sample:
Willowflight padded out of the camp to hunt. She tasted the wet, heavy air for prey. The scent of mouse and squirrel hung in the air. The mouse was nibbling a large seed under a tree root, unaware of the KITTY KAT who was stalking it. Willowflight readied herself for the pounce. She checked to make sure she was in the perfect position, though she was feeling sick because of the hunting. She never knew why she felt like that, and she hated it more than hunting. She pounced, and tripped. She cursed at her mistake, and the mouse darted away to a burrow. Willowflight then stomped back to camp, not caring that she was scaring away the rest of the prey.

Woah, thus is one nasty KITTY KAT. Please add more Appearance and she needs at least 1 more thing that she is REALLY bad at.

Thanks. I've fixed it, is it good now? I'm not used to this kind of format.

It's fine. :accepted: