Bloodshine, deputy of HickoryClan

by **Callie** Wed Jul 22, 2015 9:48 am

Bloodshine is a red she-cat with orange eyes and long claws. She's ambitious and proud and can be angered very easily. At age 27, she's considered young for a deputy. She hates the leader and the medicine cat and hopes that Petalstorm will become full medicine cat soon, not just because she is her best friend, but because of her past. She would never hurt anyone in her clan, though. This is her story: When Bloodshine was an apprentice, Petalstorm was apprenticed with her. A StreamClan warrior by the name of Mudfoot killed her mother, Hazelpelt. She was still alive when they brought her back to camp, and the medicine cat did everything she could to help her. But her efforts were in vain, and Hazelpelt died. Her father, Yuccaplant, said it would all be better in the morning. She begged for the leader to lead a patrol to StreamClan to raid and kill them, but he refused. That night, she killed her father, hoping no one would find out. Next, she sought out Mudfoot and killed him too. She told of this only to Petalstorm. She used to have a brother named Mushroomkit, but she killed him too, earning her dreadful name.
Roleplay Sample~ Obscure clouds, the color of charcoal covered the sky. The resplendent moon fell behind an livid storm cloud. A well-muscled yet lean blood-red she-cat emerged from underneath the undergrowth. There was a doubtful smirk splattered across her expression. “Who are you?” Her head tilt inquisitively. There was a sly, yet cunning demeanor to the she-cat; her hostility yet to make an appearance. Her midnight claws caught the moonlight's reflection, revealing speckles of encrusted blood. She waited patiently for an answer. Almost too patiently.

by **Honorchior** Thu Jul 23, 2015 9:16 pm

She killed her brother, a kit, when she was an apprentice?

You said she earned her name, so that would mean that her Clan found out, and killing your brother and father is a huge cause for being exiled. Leaders pick loyal cats to be deputies, not ones who want them dead. In Tigerclaw's case, Bluestar thought he was a good guy, but that was proved wrong later.

In her personality, you then say that she would not harm anyone in her Clan. What is so different from her family and her Clan? You are also asking for a big role, so we need a roleplay sample, a longer personality, an age in moons, and a longer history.

by **Daisy** Fri Jul 24, 2015 7:29 am

Me and Callie already discussed her having this role, I'm sorry that I didn't contact you beforehand. She means that she always had the prefix "Blood-", but she earned it after killing her family. She acted loyal which is why Lindenstar chose her as deputy.

@Callie, just add her age in moons and a roleplay sample, and you'll be good to go.

by **Honorchior** Fri Jul 24, 2015 10:04 am

Okay, I just don't understand how she's an apprentice while her brother is a kit. Thank you for telling me.

by **Daisy** Mon Aug 10, 2015 3:38 pm

Bump. Please finish, Grey.

by **Callie** Sat Aug 22, 2015 7:48 pm

Fixed! :)

by **Daisy** Sat Aug 22, 2015 8:05 pm

by **Callie** Sat Aug 22, 2015 8:08 pm

Yay thanks Dais! Razz

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