Ashastar, Leader of HickoryClan

Name: Ashapetal (Formerly)
Age: 20 moons
Gender: She-Cat
Preferred Position: Leader
Clan: HickoryClan
Alive Family: Irisleaf (Sister) (Warrior)
Deceased Family: Brindlekit (Sister) Pigeonflight (Brother) Frostpaw (Sister) Bramblestep (Father) Dapplefur (Mother)
Description: Ashapetal is a brown-grey cat with dark brown stripes along her back and light brown stripes on her tail. She has hazel colored eyes, a brown nose, and brown paw pads. Ashapetal has many stripes around her face. She has white paws.

Physical Abilities: (Fighting 9) (Hunting 7) (Swimming 3) (Stealth 10) (Speed (Climbing 6) (Healing 1)
Personality: Ashapetal is very warm-hearted to her clan, but to other cats she seems very cruel, unless she is at a gathering. She is used to helping others, for her sister Irisleaf often got into trouble when they were younger. Ashapetal is very serious, but she can joke around sometimes if there's nothing much to do.
History: Ashapetal was born first out of the kits in her litter. Her father, Bramblestep, died in a battle when Ashapetal was just a kit. Brindlekit, her sister, died when she was still a kit because she was taken by a hawk at 1 moon. When the rest of them were apprentices, Dapplefur, Ashapetal's mother, noticed that she was very stealthy when hunting. Frostpaw was killed by a snake when she went hunting one day. The three remaining siblings did everything together as warriors when they got the chance. One tragic day, they were hunting and Ashapetal and Irisleaf her a screech from the distance. They ran over and found Pigeonflight dying because something had severely injured him. They brought him back to the medicine den, but it was too late when they got there. Dapplefur passed away because of age right before Ashapetal became leader. Now, Irisleaf and Ashapetal protect each other and their clan because they don't want anymore unnatural casualties in HickoryClan.


Roleplay Sample: Ashastar stretched her legs as she opened her jaws in a long yawn. She padded out of her den to see the morning patrol ready to leave. A few other cats sat out in the clearing grooming themselves and chatting over the latest gathering. Ashastar noticed Irisleaf, her sister, trying to surprise Ashastar.
"Irisleaf, I can see you."
"Aw, Ashastar you're no fun." Irisleaf pouted as she stepped beside Ashastar. Ashastar licked Irisleaf's ear.
"I don't have time for games Irisleaf, you know that. Being leader is harder than it looks."
"I know, I know, you're incredibly busy with all you're leader stuff, but don't you have time to let me pounce on you once in a while?"
"Maybe next time you'll get me, or maybe i'm just to good for you." Ashastar teased. Irisleaf batted Ashastar's ear gently.
"Nice speech last night, but it could've been better." Irisleaf said back.
"Irisleaf I don't have time for games. You're on this morning's hunting patrol. Go gather a few other cats to go with you." Ashastar nudged her sister away from her.
"See you later, when I catch more things than you can carry!" Irisleaf called, then ran off. Ashastar rolled her eyes and then began to groom herself.

I think 20 moons is a little young for a leader, that would be less than 2 years. Other than that, it looks really great. And when will you be creating the sister? And is the mother alive? Then it will be accepted.

Bump. Please fix, Ember.

Bump. This has been out too long and I have took the position now.